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Very urgent feedbackThe abstract is difficult to understand as there are connection gap. We have to improve Abstract.The stakeholder framework in the work was not explain in the body of the work.The analysis in point (3) should have a framework that show the flow of points analyzed led to the result of the research. Triple bottom was mentioned in the recommendation 3rd paragraph which was not used or mentioned before in the work.Generally, I said this work should be read and correction made as you can see some disconnections why reading the work, for example. You see “firstly” and will not see the conclusion.Revise the paper while making sure it’s within word count limit. Maximum word count is 3300w (excluding Abstract & referece List)
