Description
hello this isAnalyze health risks and health care needs among distinct populations.
Criterion
Explain how an organization’s work impacts the health and/or safety needs of a local community.
Your Result:BASIC
Describes an organization’s work in community health and safety.
Faculty Comments:This section needs more details on how the organization impacts the health and safety needs of a local community. The rubric criteria for this section is to explain how this organization specifically helps a local community and how nurses can become involved with the organization at a local level.
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Competency 2
Propose health promotion strategies to improve the health of populations.
Criterion
Explain how an organization’s mission and vision enable it to contribute to public health and safety improvements.
Your Result:PROFICIENT
Explains how an organization’s mission and vision enable it to contribute to public health and safety improvements.
Faculty Comments:Good start! You clearly explained how the organization’s mission and vision enable it to contribute to public health and safety improvements. I am glad you included coaching boys to men but very little mention. To earn a distinguished designation, you need to provide a specific, relevant example(s) with a reference to support of how a local or global initiative supports its mission and vision and promotes public health and safety.
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Competency 3
Evaluate health policies, based on their ability to achieve desired outcomes.
Criterion
Assess the impact of funding sources, policy, and legislation on an organization’s service delivery.
Your Result:NON_PERFORMANCE
Does not identify funding sources, policy, and legislation related to on an organization’s service delivery.
Faculty Comments:I noticed that you did not identify funding sources, policy, and legislation related to an organization’s service delivery. How does this organization receive funding to operate? Has there been a decrease in funding that impacted services? I recommend always keeping your scoring guide rubric close by as you complete your assessments so that no criterion will be overlooked.
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Competency 4
Integrate principles of social justice in community health interventions.
Criterion
Evaluate an organization’s ability to promote equal opportunity and improve the quality of life in a community.
Your Result:BASIC
Describes how an organization promotes equal opportunity and improves the quality of life in a community.
Faculty Comments:You identified how the organization improves the quality of life in communities. For a higher score, you need an in-depth evaluation of how the organization promotes equal opportunity. Specific examples on how the organization improves the quality of life in a community is needed.
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Competency 5
Apply professional, scholarly communication strategies to lead health promotion and improve population health.
Criterion
Organize content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.
Your Result:PROFICIENT
Organizes content so ideas flow logically with smooth transitions; contains few errors in grammar/punctuation, word choice, and spelling.
Faculty Comments:Most of your writing was clear and logical. Need to left align paper. Headings need to be level 1. There were some errors in grammar, see my comments in the paper. I hope you will use the Academic Writer website: https://academicwriter-apa-org.library.capella.edu… to help you with this. You have the potential to be an excellent writer.
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Criterion
Apply APA formatting to in-text citations and references exhibiting nearly flawless adherence to APA format.
Your Result:BASIC
Applies APA formatting to in-text citations, headings and references incorrectly and/or inconsistently, detracting noticeably from the content. Inconsistently uses headings, quotes and/or paraphrasing.
Faculty Comments:There were errors in APA format. See my comments in paper. Per instructions need to cite at least three credible sources from peer-reviewed journals published within the past 5 years that support your research findings.I hope you will use https://apastyle.apa.org/search?query=7th+edition+… to help you with this. You have the potential to be an excellent writer.
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Submitted Assessment
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