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please review these comments made by the professor, then complete the worksheet belowprofessor comments: Some of the sub-headings were helpful, but others seemed to address aspects of the prompt in order, instead of in a cohesive way that is appropriate for the genre.Missing explanation of how the interviewee’s career is related to your future career goals
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STUDENT GRAMMAR LOG
Ling 305
Directions:
Once you receive your graded draft, locate three sentences your instructor has marked as
ungrammatical. (If the instructor marked fewer than three sentences, then only revise
those sentences.) Then, use the student sample provided as a guide to complete your
assessment and correction of the error. As this document is available on Blackboard, you
can copy and paste the chart.
Please note: the instructor will indicate your errors using the symbols on the editing
list. You will need to look the error up in the Lumen Learning Guide to Language
or online if you are not familiar with the error.
Requirements for each entry:
My ungrammatical
sentence:
The grammar
error:
My reasoning for
making the error:
Rule needed to fix
the sentence:
My sentence
corrected:
Instructor
Comments:
Please write the sentence exactly as it is written in your paper.
After discovering the error, please name which error is present in the
sentence.
Attempt to explain why you made the error. Was it a mistake/typo? Did
you misunderstand the rule? Was the error because of a rule in your
native language?
Explain how to fix the error you have discovered.
Please correct and rewrite your sentence here.
Leave this space open for your instructor’s comments.
Student Sample
Carmen Fuentes
RWS 281
Professor Rogers
Grammar Log
PROJECT #1
Example Grammar Log Entry
My ungrammatical The author employs many different strategies to try and convince his
sentence:
audience, he uses rhetorical questions, metaphors, and analogies.
The grammar
error:
Comma splice: when two independent clauses are joined by only a
comma.
My reasoning for
making the error:
The second sentence seemed more like an added element and not another
complete sentence. I see now that they are two independent clauses.
Rule needed to fix
the sentence:
Comma splice: when two independent clauses are joined by only a
comma. There are three options to fix a comma splice: 1) Make it two
sentences, 2) Add a coordinating conjunction (and, but, etc.), or 3) Use a
semicolon.
The author employs many different strategies to try and convince his
audience; he uses rhetorical questions, metaphors, and analogies.
My sentence
corrected:
Instructor
Comments:
Sentence 1
My ungrammatical
sentence:
The grammar
error:
My reasoning for
making the error:
Rule needed to fix
the sentence:
My sentence
corrected:
Instructor
Comments:
Sentence 2
My ungrammatical
sentence:
The grammar
error:
My reasoning for
making the error:
Rule needed to fix
the sentence:
My sentence
corrected:
Instructor
Comments:
Sentence 3
My ungrammatical
sentence:
The grammar
error:
My reasoning for
making the error:
Rule needed to fix
the sentence:
My sentence
corrected:
Instructor
Comments:
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