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Part I. For this assignment, you will compose a manuscript cover letter to the editor of the journal to which you wrote your Letter to the Editor. I t is your responsibility to ensure that the journal to which you are submitting allows for Letters to the Editor/Commentaries. Provide the editor with some information about the paper and you, the corresponding author. The cover letter should include the following: Title of the manuscript/letter Provide a rationale for your submission. Why are you writing this letter and what does your letter address, specifically? Summarize. Full name, affiliation, and complete contact information of the corresponding author Exhibit 14.3 in the Oermann textbook (page 294-295) provides a sample letter. See pages 293-295 for more details. Formatting Instructions: Use a normal font and typeface, such as Arial or Times New Roman, 11- or 12- point type Include your name, address, and phone number, email address, and website (consider LinkedIn or Twitter if you use it only for professional purposes). Address a specific editor (double-check contact name and credentials) Limit your letter to one single-spaced page (should the email be printed) Though your email should be professional, try to write your email as though you are communicating with a friend. Be personable and allow the editor to hear your voice as they read your work. Avoid slang and abbreviations, as well as colloquialisms (Ex: 24/7).The attached is a link to the journal article and a letter to the editor that I already wrote
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Letter to the Editor on obesity in children
Walter Ogamba
Department of Nursing
NRSE 7001: Professional Presence and Writing for the Advanced Nurse
Dr. Mel Brandau
February 11, 2024
Letter to the Editor on obesity in children
February 11, 2024
Dr. Lixia Zhao, PhD
Division of Nutrition, Physical Activity, and Obesity
National Center for Chronic Disease Prevention and Health Promotion
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
4770 Buford Highway, NE
Atlanta, GA 30341
Dear Dr. Zhao,
As a pediatric nurse researcher, I am writing this letter to articulate my concerns
regarding the recent investigation by Zhao et al. (2024) through an article entitled “Trends in
Severe Obesity Among Children Aged 2 to 4 Years.” The study reveals significant changes in
childhood obesity rates, which are important. Considering my extensive engagement in
childhood health research, I am keenly aware of the implications of these epidemiological
dynamics. The dynamics underscore the necessity for comprehensive discourse and concerted
action across interdisciplinary domains. Indeed, the ramifications of these trends serve as a
poignant reminder to collaborate and mitigate this challenge.
The discoveries expounded upon in the article elucidate the complex interplay of factors
contributing to childhood obesity. Although the documented decrease in severe obesity rates
between 2010 and 2016 offered hope, the subsequent increase from 2016 to 2020 warrants
thoughtful examination (Zhao et al., 2024). These trends underscore the urgent need for
comprehensive approaches to address childhood obesity at both individual and societal levels.
It is imperative to acknowledge that childhood obesity is intricately linked with broader
social, economic, and environmental factors, transcending individual behavioral choices. As
underscored in Herrera et al.’s (2024) examination of the potential role of social care in
combating childhood obesity, food insecurity emerges as a significant impediment to obesity
prevention and management. Therefore, interventions targeting social determinants of health,
including food insecurity, are essential for addressing the root causes of childhood obesity.
Additionally, I support implementing evidence-based policies and interventions to promote
healthy behaviors among children starting from early development (Herrera et al., 2024). These
initiatives should focus on improving access to nutritious foods, encouraging regular physical
activity, and fostering supportive environments within families, schools, and communities.
In conclusion, I urge policymakers, healthcare professionals, educators, and community
leaders to prioritize childhood obesity prevention and intervention efforts. It is essential to
recognize that childhood obesity is not solely a result of individual behaviors but is deeply
influenced by broader social, economic, and environmental factors. Therefore, adopting a
holistic approach that addresses these multifaceted determinants is paramount. By implementing
evidence-based policies and programs that promote access to nutritious foods, encourage
physical activity, and foster supportive environments in homes, schools, and communities, we
can create a healthier future for our children. Through concerted efforts and interdisciplinary
collaboration, we can mitigate the impact of childhood obesity and ensure the well-being and
flourishing of the next generation.
Sincerely,
Walter O., RN
Pediatric Nurse
References
Herrera, E. C., Figueroa-Nieves, A. I., & Baidal, J. A. W. (2024). The potential role of social
care in reducing childhood obesity. Current Opinion in Pediatrics, 36(1), 10-16.
https://doi.org/10.1097/MOP.0000000000001309
Zhao, L., Freedman, D. S., Blanck, H. M., & Park, S. (2024). Trends in severe obesity among
children aged 2 to 4 years in WIC: 2010 to 2020. Pediatrics, 153(1).
https://doi.org/10.1542/peds.2023-062461
Letter to the Editor on obesity in children
Walter Ogamba
Department of Nursing
NRSE 7001: Professional Presence and Writing for the Advanced Nurse
Dr. Mel Brandau
February 11, 2024
Letter to the Editor on obesity in children
February 11, 2024
Dr. Lixia Zhao, PhD
Division of Nutrition, Physical Activity, and Obesity
National Center for Chronic Disease Prevention and Health Promotion
Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
4770 Buford Highway, NE
Atlanta, GA 30341
Dear Dr. Zhao,
As a pediatric nurse researcher, I am writing this letter to articulate my concerns
regarding the recent investigation by Zhao et al. (2024) through an article entitled “Trends in
Severe Obesity Among Children Aged 2 to 4 Years.” The study reveals significant changes in
childhood obesity rates, which are important. Considering my extensive engagement in
childhood health research, I am keenly aware of the implications of these epidemiological
dynamics. The dynamics underscore the necessity for comprehensive discourse and concerted
action across interdisciplinary domains. Indeed, the ramifications of these trends serve as a
poignant reminder to collaborate and mitigate this challenge.
The discoveries expounded upon in the article elucidate the complex interplay of factors
contributing to childhood obesity. Although the documented decrease in severe obesity rates
between 2010 and 2016 offered hope, the subsequent increase from 2016 to 2020 warrants
thoughtful examination (Zhao et al., 2024). These trends underscore the urgent need for
comprehensive approaches to address childhood obesity at both individual and societal levels.
It is imperative to acknowledge that childhood obesity is intricately linked with broader
social, economic, and environmental factors, transcending individual behavioral choices. As
underscored in Herrera et al.’s (2024) examination of the potential role of social care in
combating childhood obesity, food insecurity emerges as a significant impediment to obesity
prevention and management. Therefore, interventions targeting social determinants of health,
including food insecurity, are essential for addressing the root causes of childhood obesity.
Additionally, I support implementing evidence-based policies and interventions to promote
healthy behaviors among children starting from early development (Herrera et al., 2024). These
initiatives should focus on improving access to nutritious foods, encouraging regular physical
activity, and fostering supportive environments within families, schools, and communities.
In conclusion, I urge policymakers, healthcare professionals, educators, and community
leaders to prioritize childhood obesity prevention and intervention efforts. It is essential to
recognize that childhood obesity is not solely a result of individual behaviors but is deeply
influenced by broader social, economic, and environmental factors. Therefore, adopting a
holistic approach that addresses these multifaceted determinants is paramount. By implementing
evidence-based policies and programs that promote access to nutritious foods, encourage
physical activity, and foster supportive environments in homes, schools, and communities, we
can create a healthier future for our children. Through concerted efforts and interdisciplinary
collaboration, we can mitigate the impact of childhood obesity and ensure the well-being and
flourishing of the next generation.
Sincerely,
Walter O., RN
Pediatric Nurse
References
Herrera, E. C., Figueroa-Nieves, A. I., & Baidal, J. A. W. (2024). The potential role of social
care in reducing childhood obesity. Current Opinion in Pediatrics, 36(1), 10-16.
https://doi.org/10.1097/MOP.0000000000001309
Zhao, L., Freedman, D. S., Blanck, H. M., & Park, S. (2024). Trends in severe obesity among
children aged 2 to 4 years in WIC: 2010 to 2020. Pediatrics, 153(1).
https://doi.org/10.1542/peds.2023-062461 ———————doi for the journal I wrote a
letter to.
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